Showing posts with label A Trio of Photos. Show all posts
Showing posts with label A Trio of Photos. Show all posts
Saturday, August 22, 2015
A Trio of Photos - A Meeting - P. A. Nolte
1/ The exterior of an abandoned cathedral in a small European metropolis.
Caption (Younger): Why must we continue meeting in these... places, uncle? I do not understand your fascination.
Caption (Elder): Ah, irony is lost on the young.
2/ Inside the decrepit building, standing amidst the remnants of what was once an elaborate chancel but is now a mass of splintered planks and fallen plaster are two men. The elder is admiring the lone statue of a robed woman, presumably Mary Magdalene, though we cannot see her face. The younger is pacing nervously.
Elder: The clergyman of this establishment was so very keen to appeal to the masses, he began to misconstrue the messages of his own beliefs so that he might retain his ever tenuous grasp on his congregation, and found it lost regardless.
3/ The elder grins at his disciple, shrugging in a very human fashion.
Elder: Oh, well.
4/ The younger man rolls his eyes.
Younger: You avoid my question, uncle.
5/ The elder has turned to face the younger. He stretches out his arms wide, gesturing proudly towards the dilapidation surrounding them.
Elder: Do I?
Elder: What lesson have I tried to impart time and time again?
Younger: "The safest road to Hell is the gradual one-- the gentle slope, soft underfoot, without sudden turnings, without milestones, without signposts.”
Elder: Indeed.
Elder: Come. We shall further your education over a meal.
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Thursday, August 20, 2015
Trio of Photos - ...coming soon... - Ray Wonsowski
Working on a future multi-chapter story slash proposal that's been rummaging about in my head...
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Wednesday, August 19, 2015
A Trio of Photos – Life Finds a Way – MK Stangeland Jr.
(9 Panels)
Panel 1: A small, quaint village in Europe, in ye
olden medieval days. It should appear to be a very recent development, having
hardly had an opportunity to really establish itself yet. The SUN and MOON are
positioned overhead in a way that lines up with future panels to gives the
impression of the passage of a great deal of time.
Panel 2: The same village, having matured into a
small town. Included is a stone church building featured at the center, with a
city square in front of it. It is a small, but booming community. SUN and MOON
overhead line up to show the continued passage of time.
Panel 3: Disaster Strikes! – the town has been hit by
the BLACK PLAGUE, and hard. It is a town that is falling apart and on life
support, but not quite dead yet.
The SUN and MOON
continue to pass overhead as time keeps going.
Panel 4: Years later – the town has stabilized from
the PLAGUE, and shows the earliest signs of recovery.
The SUN and MOON continue
to pass overhead as time keeps going.
Panel 5: The RENAISSANCE has arrived – the town has
not only recovered from the PLAGUE, it has grown well beyond its pre-PLAUGE
size, into a small city.
The SUN and MOON, of
course, continue to pass overhead.
Panel 6: The near future – the community is now a
city of significant size, and shows touches of futuristic elements.
The SUN and MOON
continue on their way.
Panel 7: Once again, Disaster Strikes. Off in the
distance, we see a mushroom cloud form as the city is hit by a nuclear
explosion, unleashing total destruction.
The SUN and MOON pay
this no mind, continuing to pass overhead.
Panel 8: The former city, in a post-apocalyptic
state. It is a wasteland of devastation, with ruined buildings and no signs of
life. By all accounts, the place looks completely dead.
The SUN and MOON keep
moving.
Panel 9: A town reborn! A small post-apocalyptic
survivor community, on par with the size present in PANEL 1, has set up in the
ruins of the old world, though it’s difficult to tell their actual size given
the remains that still stand. Signs of new plant and animal life are present as
well, but should be minor touches indicating that it’s a very new, very recent
development.
The SUN and the MOON
continue to move as they have since the beginning.
(END PAGE)
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Monday, August 17, 2015
A Trio of Photos - Best Laid Schemes - Grant McLaughlin
1 - Owen stands at the foot of a bed in a small, dingy apartment / hotel. He holds his hands to his head in fear / frustration. An open briefcase sits on the bed. It's filled with what look to be ledgers, papers, and the like.
CAPTION (OWEN): Jules said the case would be stuffed with cash.
OWEN (quiet): fuck
2 - Now on one knee Owen is rifling through the briefcase's contents in a panic, maybe throwing things out here and there.
CAPTION (OWEN): Instead, it's filled with Mr. B's books.
OWEN: Fuck.
3 - Owen picks up the suitcase and throws it across the room into a wall. Its contents spill and fly out - books, ledgers, and papers going everywhere. If desired, an old revolver can also be seen coming out, although it doesn't have to be obvious.
CAPTION (OWEN): Every detail of his operations. Money spent. Crimes committed. Lives ruined.
OWEN (loud): FUCK!
4 - Owen stands surveying the mess he's made. Books, ledgers, and papers are all over the places. There's also that aforementioned revolver, which is near the door.
CAPTION (OWEN): It's all here.
Owen (quiet): ...what?
5 - Owen is down on his hands and knees, picking up and examining the revolver. A knock is visible at the door.
CAPTION (OWEN): And I'm the dumbfuck who took it.
SFX: KNOK! KNOK!
6 - Owen looks up towards the door, holding the gun in front of his face so his mouth is covered and one eye looks through the trigger guard. While his expression is partially masked, it's clear that he's scared out of his mind (as per the third photo from Shaun's prompt).
OWEN (quiet): fuck
CAPTION (OWEN): Jules said the case would be stuffed with cash.
OWEN (quiet): fuck
2 - Now on one knee Owen is rifling through the briefcase's contents in a panic, maybe throwing things out here and there.
CAPTION (OWEN): Instead, it's filled with Mr. B's books.
OWEN: Fuck.
3 - Owen picks up the suitcase and throws it across the room into a wall. Its contents spill and fly out - books, ledgers, and papers going everywhere. If desired, an old revolver can also be seen coming out, although it doesn't have to be obvious.
CAPTION (OWEN): Every detail of his operations. Money spent. Crimes committed. Lives ruined.
OWEN (loud): FUCK!
4 - Owen stands surveying the mess he's made. Books, ledgers, and papers are all over the places. There's also that aforementioned revolver, which is near the door.
CAPTION (OWEN): It's all here.
Owen (quiet): ...what?
5 - Owen is down on his hands and knees, picking up and examining the revolver. A knock is visible at the door.
CAPTION (OWEN): And I'm the dumbfuck who took it.
SFX: KNOK! KNOK!
6 - Owen looks up towards the door, holding the gun in front of his face so his mouth is covered and one eye looks through the trigger guard. While his expression is partially masked, it's clear that he's scared out of his mind (as per the third photo from Shaun's prompt).
OWEN (quiet): fuck
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Sunday, August 16, 2015
A Trio of Photos - Finch & Ruiz - Shaun Richens
PAGE ONE - 6 PANELS.
1.1
Open on a close up of DETECTIVE FINCH, he’s middle aged, lean,
his hair rests in a widows peak - he wears a suit that is functional not
fashionable. His face wears the look of disgust.
FINCH:
Fuck.
1.2
Cut to. We are looking down an escalator coming up out of a
busy tube station. DETECTIVE RUIZ is the focus as she nears the top of the
escalator. She holds her phone to her ear. She’s young, but tough looking.
She’s hard edged and cynical. She wears a dark grey suit, no tie, her dark hair
cut short. Her badge hooked on her belt.
RUIZ:
Finch? What is it? I’ve had like twenty missed calls. I was
underground.
1.3
Reveal shot. Looking over Finch’s shoulder into an abandoned
church, he’s still on the phone to Ruiz. Light spills in through the cracked
stained glass window. Light pools around a chair in the centre of the room, the
corpse of a young boy hangs from the ceiling. A few police officers in uniform
are putting police warning tape up around the scene.
FINCH:
It’s him Ruiz. We’ve got another kid. Same m.o. as the others.
1.4
Cut back to Ruiz. She is now on street level, walking through a
busy downtown main street in a large urban city.
RUIZ:
You sure it’s him? We’ve had copycats before.
1.5
Cut to a close up on a photo pinned up to a corkboard. The
photo is grainy, but the face of a man can be made out. He is middle aged,
short dark hair. He holds a pistol in his hand, the weapon obscures most of his
face.
CAPTION FINCH:
Trust me. It’s him, it’s Preston Bishop. Our goddamn ghost in
the wind.
1.6
Pull back - we reveal the whole of the cork board. It’s
massive. The photo from the last panel sits in the centre. All around it are
other photos, gangs of men, weapons, maps with locations circled, a few
evidence photos from murder scenes. A few hand written notes (we can’t make out
what they say.)
CAPTION FINCH:
Three years and all we’ve got is a grainy photo of this psycho.
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Why A Trio of Photos? - Shaun Richens
The old adage says that a picture's
worth a thousand words, well this week I want to see what three
pictures can do for our words and what our words can do with them.
Comics is truly unique medium in the way pictures and words are used in combination. We can tell layered narratives interweaving both the visuals and the written word in ways that novels and movies just can’t.
We will be taking inspiration from the
three black and white photos gathered here.
We can use them directly as panels for
the script, maybe even trying to link all three into one story. Or
maybe you’ll decide to focus just on one photo, perhaps as a
location for a confrontation? Or the meeting point for a love affair.
Maybe your character is on the run from one of these places.
One of the images might inspire a character for you to toy around with. A fully fleshed out person for you to push and pull to get to the heart of what makes them tick.
Your page could be about the person who
took the photos, are they for a school project? Maybe they are the
only photos on a roll of film found on a murder victim? Do the photos
have sentimental value? Do they put someone in the wrong place at the
wrong time?
Or maybe you hate the photos? That’s
ok too. Go and find a photo that brings a story to life for you. All
I ask is that you share it along with your story, so we can see where
it takes us.
I want us to explore the hidden stories that live in these still moments in time. I want us to collect all the tales that are conjured up for each and everyone of us.
As always, myself and all the writers
at Thoughtballoons would love to have people at home come and share
stories with us too.
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