Showing posts with label Injustice. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Injustice. Show all posts

Saturday, February 15, 2014

Injustice - Displacement - Brian Manton


P1
Splash Page

A Lexcorp laboratory - completely automated and unmanned. Vital signs are displayed across rows of incubators - a baby lies sleeping in each one.

In the centre of the room Zatanna lies restrained to a hospital trolley. She looks drugged and emaciated.

CAP: And then, two heartbeats coming from one person - stop beating.

Zatana: --vasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihe--

Injustice - Dragons, Awake! - R.A. Wonsowski

Page 2:

Comic layout is horizontal, for the "widescreen" reading experience.

Splash page:  Look, up in the sky...SUPERMAN, foreground, is reeling in pain, burning in the flames from the mouths of a three-headed dragon, which is flying out of a magical, bird-shaped portal.  Riding on each of its necks, from left to right, are ETRIGAN the Demon, RAVEN, and JOHN CONSTANTINE.  ETRIGAN is adding the hellfire from his mouth to the magical blaze, and JOHN is screaming into the sky with glee, fist pumping in the air.  The pentagrammed eyes of TRIGON watch from beyond.

CONSTANTINE:  ...Because SUPERMAN'S A WANKER!!!*

CAPTION (Batman):  ...and Clark is helpless against more than just Kryptonite...

CAPTION: "Now I'm going home - in the distance, I can see them - Proudly waving flags to separate and free them..." - Bob Pollard (Guided by Voices)

*NOTE - The final line in Etrigan's rhyme, which Constantine finishes here, starts on Page 1 as follows: "The horrific reign of the Tyrant of Steel - O'er humanity is a tumorous canker - Thus let magick's might bring the Kryptonian to heel..."

Friday, February 14, 2014

Injustice - Turn - Niel Jacoby

Panel 1: Superman stands in the Hall Of Justice meeting room, addressing the other members of the Justice League. He is forlorn.

Superman: IN LIGHT OF THE RECENT HAPPENINGS IN MY PERSONAL LIFE, I FIND MYSELF TOO HEARTBROKEN TO PROPERLY LEAD THIS TEAM.

Panel 2: Superman is hanging his head in sorrow, still addressing the Justice League. We cannot see the wall behind him. The rest of the League is shocked.

Superman: AND SO, I ANNOUNCE MY RETIREMENT FROM THE JUSTICE LEAGUE...

SFX(from off panel, behind Superman): KRRRRSHHSSHSHSHSHSS

Panel 3: Straight on shot as Superman, his face in an evil grin, is ripping the shirt of his Superman suit in half to reveal a T-Shirt with a Legion Of Doom logo, and we see the Legion Of Doom busting through the wall behind him.

Superman: EFFECTIVE... IMMEDIATELY.

Wednesday, February 12, 2014

Injustice – It’s Only Funny When It’s Not Real – MK Stangeland Jr.


(4 Panels)

Panel 1: A picture of a SUPERDICKERY-style SUPERMAN comic book cover featuring SUPERMAN being, well, a jerk in some manner related to him basically ruling the world. If possible, the name ‘Stangeland’ and that of some artist should be included. It looks like the cover is being held by SUPERMAN, but all we can see is part of his hand.

SUPERMAN: (Off Panel) You think this is funny?

MK STANGELAND JR: (Off Panel) …

Panel 2: Similar to PANEL 1 with another comic book cover in the same style, being held by the same person in their other hand.

SUPERMAN: (Off Panel) DO YOU?!

MK STANGELAND JR: (Off Panel) Y-Yes! Yes I DO!

Panel 3: MK STANGELAND JR. is falling out of the sky. He looks absolutely TERRIFIED. SUPERMAN is flying downwards next to him, and looks like he’s standing upside down with his arms crossed in front of his chest as he goes.

MK STANGELAND JR.: -AAAAAAAAAAAAAA-

SUPERMAN: Still think it’s funny?

Panel 4: Similar to PANEL 3, but SUPERMAN looks angrier in this panel.

MK STANGELAND JR.: -AAAAAAAAAAAAAA-

SUPERMAN: Why aren’t you LAUGHING, FUNNYMAN?!

(END PAGE)

Monday, February 10, 2014

Injustice - The Mirror - Grant McLaughlin

1 - We're outside a dressing room, looking at its door.  "Duncan Fairweather" is written across it.  A conversation is occuring within the room, giving us some tailless balloons.

JERRY (within, tailless balloon): You're not actually going to do this, are you?

DUNCAN (within, tailless balloon): Of course I am.

2 - Interior.  We see two men, Duncan and Jerry (both new characters, no reference).  Duncan is sitting in a chair, putting on makeup, while Jerry stands behind him.  Their backs are to the reader, but we can see their faces in the reflection of the mirror - Jerry is worried, while Duncan is concentrating on makeup, so he looks pretty nonchalant about the whole thing.  For context, Duncan is wearing an undershirt and boxers, as he still hasn't put on his costume.

DUNCAN (1): I've put in far too much effort not to.

DUNCAN (2): Writing.

DUNCAN (3): Rehearsing.

DUNCAN (4): Promoting.

DUNCAN (5): Hell, finding a venue was damn near impossible.

3 - Jerry turns Duncan's chair around, forcing Duncan to look him in the eye (and potentially take this seriously).

DUNCAN: You'd be amazed at how many theatres turned me down.

JERRY: No, I wouldn't.  I'm shocked that anyone was stupid enough to say yes.

4 - Duncan has stood up and is putting on a costume.  It's a gaudy superhero outfit, with underwear on the outisde, a cape, and presumably some type of logo (which cannot be seen at present).  Duncan is stepping into the costume, so it isn't completely on yet.  Jerry stands with his arms crossed, perhaps turned away slightly from Duncan.  Duncan appears to pay Jerry's words little mind.

JERRY (1): They're not going to like it.

JERRY (2) (quieter): He's not going to like it.

5 - Duncan, now with the costume fully on, turns to Jerry and pats him encouragingly on the cheek - he is too excited and assured to be swayed.  Despite the warm action, Jerry's concern remains.

DUNCAN (1): Calm down, Jerry.  Surely they have better things to police than art.

DUNCAN (2): Besides, some good old fashioned truth-to-power could do them some good.

6 - Outside the theatre.  It's night time.  The marquee reads "The Übermensch". Superman floats in the foreground, watching the theatre (maybe have it so you can only see his legs / feet, although his shadow could be visible on the ground - either way, his back is to the reader, so his expression cannot be seen). While the theatre and marquee are lit up in the night, Superman is shrouded in the darkness.

CAPTION (DUNCAN): Honestly, what's the worst that could happen?

Sunday, February 9, 2014

Injustice - What a Wonderful World - Ben Rosenthal



1.  A shot of Gotham, destroyed.  A fight has taken place.

CAPTION
It was the only way.


2.  Batman is laying on the ground, bloody, beaten and dead.

CAPTION
A man driven mad by grief.
Another who was never truly sane.


3.  Superman lays near Batman, his neck snapped.

CAPTION
Both too egotistical to think of the price of their battle.


4.  Wonder Woman is standing tall above their bodies.  She is in control now.

CAPTION
I did what I had to do.
For you.
Welcome to my new Amazonia.

Why Injustice?


In a world where Superman has gone mad can the heroes of the DC universe rally to stop the Man of Steel?

Australian writer Tom Taylor has had complete creative freedom with Injustice, not something that many creators in the Big Two have the luxury of.   The series acts as a prequel, taking place during the five years before the main events of the game's story mode. The original online series was released weekly, while Year Two is now released on every other Tuesday of every month.



What will the writers of Thought Balloons cook up given the same creative freedom in this alternate DC Universe?  Join us this week as we tackle Injustice!

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