Elektra: If I fail, I’ll see you soon.
Monday, May 25, 2015
Elektra - One Last Hunt - Ryan K. Lindsay
Elektra: If I fail, I’ll see you soon.
Sunday, May 24, 2015
Why Elektra? - Ryan K. Lindsay
Plus, she’s got a killer visual that despite being one of those costumes that isn’t enough, it still looks amazing. Maybe because she carries it so well. Or probably no one would ever mess with Elektra, or even waste her time discussing fashion choices.
If you’ve ever read Elektra’s first appearance, you’ll see she was kinda a damsel at heart. Frank Miller writes an insane romance comic, with romancey internal thoughtballoons, and she’s not exactly the strongest or most independent character. She’s very much Matt Murdock’s first love. And yet now, when I think about Elektra, which happens often, I find I don’t think of Elektra like that at all anymore. She’s had amazing growth since her inception.
Through to the conclusion of Miller’s Elektra Saga, our lady in red just went from strength to strength. Icing that informant in the cinema from behind Ben Urich is still one of my favourite scenes of all time. After that we had ELEKTRA: ASSASSIN and ELEKTRA LIVES AGAIN and suddenly independent mythos was born. She is no one’s girl, she’s this insane killer bad ass who can carry her own, and her own book. Or story. At least for a little while.
She was supposed to be put away once Miller let her be, an agreement with Jim Shooter that lasted right up until it didn’t. Resurrected, she’s been used ever since and to varying degrees. For me, it all started to really pull up out of a nose dive when Zeb Wells wrote her Dark Reign mini. That story, terse, violent, perfect, really helped solidify who Elektra was now. Quiet, deadly, brutal: a force of nature. That mini is maybe the best Dark Reign thing to exist.
Recently, we just wrapped an 11 issue run of ELEKTRA by Mike del Mundo and W. Haden Blackman and it’s one of the best comics of the past few years. It started strong but really charted upwards right until the end. A shame it came to an end but I’d rather 11 tight issues than a bloated 24 which peter out. Get in, get out, seems to be the Elektra way.
So because when she’s done well she’s usually done perfectly, and because we can all always practise writing our fantastic female leads, here she is, my favourite lady, Elektra Natchios.
Sunday, May 17, 2015
D4VE - Self Improvement Is Masturbation, Now Self Destruction Is The Answer - Ryan K. Lindsay
Establishing shot of D4VE's garage.
SFX: TUNK
SFX: plink
PANEL TWO
Shot of D4VE, mood lit from above, whiskey bottle nearby, inside the garage. We cannot see his hands here.
Caption: ...
PANEL THREE
D4VE raises a gnarly hammer above his head with his left hand.
D4VE: Fuck you.
PANEL FOUR
D4VE smashes the hammer down, we don't see what on.
SFX: TUNK
PANEL FIVE
D4VE takes a sip of his drink with his left hand.
D4VE: ugh
PANEL SIX
D4VE puts a new metal hand into the end of his right wrist.
SFX: plink
PANEL SEVEN
D4VE flexes the hand in front of his face.
D4VE: Fuck you.
PANEL EIGHT
We cut across to a pile of mangled hands in the corner of the garage.
D4VE (op): Fuck all you.
PANEL NINE
Black panel.
SFX: TUNK
Why thoughtballoons? - Ryan K. Lindsay
I made thoughtballoons because I love to write and it seemed like it would be fun. I also created thoughtballoons because I wanted and needed the practise and I knew a cause would put me on the right track, different ideas would keep me interested, the one page length would make it feasible, a deadline would keep me honest, and the feedback would help.
And I was right.
I wrote at least one page of script a week from high action to quiet family moments, and I didn't miss a week for two whole years, and in that time I improved. Without a doubt, I improved. I got to see what worked with a captive audience, and what landed flat. I got to experiment, I got to consolidate, I got to write comics and do it purely as a learning exercise. No wasting an artist's time because I suck, no putting it into print when I wasn't ready. This is writing as training, this is what you need to do.
I loved those two years. I would not be where I am today without those two years. I miss those two years. Because writing for love of the game is the fun times. And slowing yourself down to learn the lessons is the important stuff.
- Ryan K. Lindsay
Friday, March 15, 2013
Rainbow Dash - The Plot Thickens - J.D. Coughlan
Following his retirement, Ryan K. Lindsay joins forces with Rainbow Dash for some wacky adventures!
Panel 1: A slummy crime den. The criminals, up to no good, react with surprise as Ryan K. Lindsay kicks the door in. Rainbow Dash should be visible behind him, if possible.
RYAN: Freeze! Ryan K. Lindsay, comic book writer!
Panel 2: Ryan has the perps against the wall, and is handcuffing the last one. Rainbow Dash checks a stack of papers on the table.
RYAN: You punks make me sick.
DASH: My gosh! Ryan, this goes further than we thought.
Panel 3: Ryan looks over at Dash. She holds up the papers frantically.
RYAN: What's that, partner?
DASH: They were planning on unleashing a virulent strain of writer's block on your old pals over at Thought Balloons, thus nullifying their inescapably awesome talent!
Panel 4: Close up on Ryan, grinning and looking right at us.
RYAN: Heh. Guess I'm still looking out for you boys...
Panel 5: Ryan presses one of the perps up against the wall, hard. Dash's speech bubble should be blocking his last word.
RYAN: You think you'd get away with it, you sons of [blocked]
DASH: Language!
END OF PAGE
Saturday, December 15, 2012
Congratulations!
In news that surprise none that know him, former(?) Thought Balloons head honcho Ryan K. Lindsay has his first big commercial comic release in March. My LIttle Pony: Friendship is Magic Miniseries is the first of many projects you can expect to see from Mr Lindsay, and everyone here at Thought Balloons is proud of our team mate.
Be sure to pick up this book when it drops in March. Ryan is an excellent writer and you may be surprised with how much you actually like a book about friendship and ponies.
Saturday, June 9, 2012
RKL - Into The Sunset - Ray Wonsowski (the American Zombie)
NO COPY
Panel 2 - P.O.V. over the cowboy's shoulder, as he grabs the pommel of the saddle to mount his horse. He's looking at a little boy in tattered work clothes, his long-ish hair blowing in the afternoon breeze. He is holding a tattered issue of a pulp adventure in his hands: Adventures of the Squared Circle Gang.
KID: Mister?
KID: Think you'll ever come back someday?
Panel 3 - From the Kid's P.O.V., looking up into the face of the cowboy on his horse. It's RYAN K. LINDSAY, adjusting his hat over his eyes, squinting like Eastwood, cheroot still in his teeth, a knowing smile on his face.
RYAN K.: I don't know, kid. Ranch is in good hands, I reckon. Maybe someday.
RYAN K.: But if and when I do...
Panel 4 - Foreground, we see the Kid sitting on the fence, pulp adventure rolledup and in his back pocket, waving goodbye to our hero. RYAN K. is framed by the ranch gate, riding away, silhouetted by the setting sun, sitting tall in the saddle.
RYAN K.: I'm bringing all Hell riding with me.
CAPTION: Vaya Con Dios, Amigo. Gracias.
El Fin
Friday, June 8, 2012
RKL - The Final Chapter - Niel J. Jacoby
Caption: AND WITH THAT, RYAN TOOK HIS LEAVE FROM THOUGHTBALLOONS.
Caption: HIS WORK LAY ELSEWHERE.
Inset Panel 1: The horse freaks out, and Ryan falls on his ass.
Caption: NO ONE KNOWS WHAT THE FUTURE HOLDS, BUT RYAN KNEW HE WAS BOUND FOR GREAT THINGS.
SFX: BONK!
Horse: NEIII-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-IGGGHHHH!
Inset Panel 2: Ryan is getting up, watching his horse run away. He's not injured, but he's definitely a little sore.
Ryan(thoughtballoon): MAYBE THIS WASN'T THE BEST WAY TO MAKE MY DRAMATIC EXIT...
Caption: BUT WHATEVER AWAITS, THE WRITERS AND READERS OF THOUGHTBALLOONS WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER THE NAME RYAN K. LINDSAY.
Ryan K. Lindsay - Thought Balloons Central - J.D. Coughlan
Panel 1: Ryan's office in Thought Balloons HQ. Ryan sits behind his desk, stern expression on his face, fingers steepled. JD sits across from him, still the cocky new hotshot.
RYAN: As you know, Coughlan, I announced my early retirement recently...
JD: A tragic loss to us all, sir.
Panel 2: Small. Close on Ryan. No-nonsense.
RYAN: Can the ass-kissing, kid.
Panel 3: On JD. His facade slipping a little, showing the nervousness underneath.
RYAN (OP): You'll be among the last batch of new recruits I personally hand-picked for this unit.
Panel 4: Over JD's shoulder. Ryan leans forward intensely.
RYAN: There is a reason for that.
Panel 5: Outside Ryan's office, the "bullpen" area. The other Thought Ballooners work frantically at their desks. We can still see Ryan and JD's silhouettes through the glass. Ryan is gesturing to the others.
RYAN: (Through the glass) I need you to keep an eye on my boys and report back to me, in secret...
Panel 6: Small. Very close on JD. He is stunned, completely breaking his facade.
RYAN (OP): One of them is not who he appears to be...
END OF PAGE
Thursday, June 7, 2012
Ryan K Lindsay – No Copy, Just Lindsay – Shaun Richens.
Wednesday, June 6, 2012
Ryan K Lindsay – The Secret History of ThoughtBalloons OR ThoughtBalloons: Year One – MK Stangeland Jr.
*(Important Writers Note: Normally, I prefer not to edit scripts after they have gone live. However, in this case I've made an exception since this line originally said "Ryan K Lindsay, founder of the Weekly Crisis", which is was written based on an incorrect assumption. The line has since been changed in order to prevent this incorrect presumption being passed on to others.)
Tuesday, June 5, 2012
RKL- A Certain Point Of View- Dan Hill
This was one of those scripts where I had a million and one ideas. But in the end I just went with what came first. There was hardly any redrafting with this one. I just went with what came into my head. It's all gut (no German pun intended). I hope it does the man justice.
Panel One
CUT TO a CLOSE UP of an almost blank document, displayed on a computer screen.
The only text present on the page is the legend ‘Page One, Panel One’ in bold font.
CAPTION: We live our lives through the things we write.
Panel Two
CUT TO a CLOSE UP on a blog creation screen on Blogspot. The only thing filled out so far is the blog's title-- THOUGHT BALLOONS.
CAPTION: Application forms, letters, emails, Facebook, Twitter.
Panel Three
CUT TO a CLOSE UP on the logo of ‘The Process’, again being displayed on a computer monitor.
CAPTION: But for some of us the written word is so much more--
Panel Four
CUT TO a CLOSE UP on an email subject line. The line reads ‘Re: Ongoing’.
CAPTION: -- a means to put ourselves out into the world.
Panel Five
CUT TO a CLOSE UP on a blog post in progress on Blogspot. The text is taken straight from Ryan’s post announcing his exit from Thought Balloons.
CAPTION: To make our mark.
Panel Six
CUT TO an exact copy of Panel One-- the almost blank document, the text ‘Page One, Panel One’ and a flashing cursor blinking. The cycle is complete.
CAPTION: To tell our stories.
CAPTION: To inspire others.
Panel Seven
Wide panel. CLOSE UP on the computer screen. It’s off now. The work is done. In the reflection of the monitor we can see RYAN walking away (sorry, no view of the beard), ready to start the day, ready to start all that other stuff that isn’t writing.
But he’ll be back. He always is.
NO COPY
Ryan K. Lindsay – There’s No ‘I’ in Ryan - Rol Hirst
Panel One.
Close on the Riddler, his hands clutched to his face, shaking, gabbling, unintelligible. This is a man in deep shock.
Riddler: There’s no ‘I’ in Ryan, there’s no ‘I’ in Ryan, there’s no ‘I’ in Ryan…
Panel Two.
Pull out to show that the Riddler is sitting on a chair in a cell, being watched through a plexiglass window by Batman and Commissioner Gordon.
Gordon: He’s been like this since we brought him in.
Batman: And you’ve no idea who did this to him?
Panel Three.
Close on Gordon, looking grim.
Gordon: The way we found him – all trussed up and hanging from that lamppost – we were convinced it was you.
Panel Four.
Close on Batman, looking grimmer.
Batman: I’ve been out of town. League business. Only got back this morning.
Batman: So you think this has something to do with that missing writer?
Panel Five.
Gordon holds up a photograph of Ryan K. Lindsay. Batman leans in to examine it. Behind them, a small window shows a starry night and the Gotham skyline.
Gordon: Ryan K. Lindsay. Australian comic book writer. Big noise in that scene. Special guest at the Gotham Comicon.
Panel Six.
Outside Gotham Central. On a nearby rooftop, a shadowy figure stands watching through the window we saw in the last panel. He’s holding a directional microphone and listening in on the conversation inside.
Gordon (from inside): No one’s seen him since Friday night…
Figure: And they’ll never seen him again, Commissioner. Because Ryan K. Lindsay is no more…
Panel Seven.
(Or, if I'm allowed to break the rules once, for my final script - Page TWO, splash panel...)
The figure leaps off the rooftop, towards us, in a big heroic pose. He’s wearing an all over face mask (black, featureless) and a long flowing detective’s mac that trails behind him like a cape. The logo on his black top features four symbols shaped like typewriter keys – N O I R…
Noir: And the night belongs to NOIR!
Thanks for the opportunity to be part of the best comics blog on the net – with the friendliest and most encouraging team of creators. Ryan K. Lindsay, I salute you!
Ryan K. Lindsay - Soon Enough - Grant McLaughlin
1 - A young girl (maybe 12 or so) stands in a comic book store in front of a shelf full of comic book trades. She looks somewhat intimidated (think "deer in the headlights"). A clerk is shelving books nearby. No dialogue.
2 - The girl turns to the clerk. The clerk leans forward on her knees, moving herself closer to the girl's height.
GIRL (quietly): E-excuse me?
CLERK: Yes?
3 - The girl is gaining some confidence. The clerk puts on a pensive look, pondering the question in an attempt to come up with the most appropriate suggestion.
GIRL (1): I want to read comics, but I dunno where to start.
GIRL (2): Can you help me?
CLERK: Hmmm.
4 - The clerk has a clear "aha!" moment. She has a look of pleased satisfaction on her face at what she's thought of.
CLERK: I think I have just the thing.
5 - The clerk grabs a book off the shelf. No dialogue.
6 - The clerk holds out a comic book. She wears a big smile.
CLERK: Have you ever heard of Ryan K. Lindsay?
Monday, May 28, 2012
Squared Circle – The Quickening – Ryan K Lindsay
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Sunday, May 20, 2012
autobiographical - ryan k lindsay
1. Wide panel. Ryan sits hunched at a desk, his desk. His head is down, his eyes are focused.
2. The exact same panel.
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5. The exact same panel.
Two Years Writing Scripts
I'm very proud of this site. thoughtballoons has been running for two years and that means I've dropped over 100 scripts without missing a week. Over a hundred scripts is no mean feat. Some of them have been terribly average, maybe even a few just plain terrible, and then there are some of which I am incredibly proud. But quality aside, I've been proud to just hit the deadlines, and I've been really happy to always have a reason to have the creative juices flowing.
Friday, May 18, 2012
Tony Chu – Beats – Ryan K Lindsay
Sunday, May 6, 2012
Animal Man – Hunted – Ryan K Lindsay
Why Animal Man?
Because he’s so hot right now. No, seriously, the guy languished for years and then suddenly he reappears in the DCnU 52 and he’s one of the best titles of the past year. Jeff Lemire and Travel Foreman, with friends, have made Animal Man a must read title once more. That’s surely no easy feat.
